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It would be nice if sources for this material were identified for other readers. In this way they can also be examined by others. It never hurts to get a liitle help. Charlie Turek magician 11Nov2004
NPOV
This article appears to be argumentative and heavily slanted. It reads like an essay, advancing the opinions of some scholars as though they are an established fact. It is also lean on citations; I would suggest that either additional citations be added, or that it be made clear that the bulk of the article is the opinion of the already existing citations. It's also worth noting that this article was started by CheeseDreams, a user who has subsequently been banned from editing articles relating to Christianity. Wesley 21:50, 5 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Bible Chapter articles?
Apart from the specific concerns with this article, I'm very concerned about the precedent for writing articles about specific chapters of the Bible. It seems to set a precedent that could lead to an attempt at full coverage, with at least some such articles amounting to little more than biblical commentary, POV pushing by either Christians with a particular theology or agenda, or by non-Christians who have an axe to grind with Christianity, as seems to be the case with this article. Wesley 21:52, 5 Feb 2005 (UTC)
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