This page is rather POV, and needs major copyediting. --Andrew 07:41, Apr 22, 2004 (UTC)
Beyond repair?
This article needs major revision, or should be deleted. As it is now, it's basically a collection of tidbits about various tribes; some of the "facts" seems rather dubious. It also awkwardly blurs the line between martial arts and warfare. All of this suggests the article began as an amateur effort at an original essay, which is not what Wikipedia is about. (See Wikipedia:No original research). What are the sources? They may be out there, but this article doesn't seem to be based on expert opinion.
Is there anyone out there who wants to step up and defend this article? --Kevin Myers 00:05, Jan 2, 2005 (UTC)
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